Lou and David Sears

I read on Verla Kay’s Blue Boards that she was starting a new critique service for writers, so I submitted my story “Cross My Heart” to her.  I received the critique back within a couple of days.  I was blown away!!  She had such kind things to say and gave wonderful suggestions in a non-threatening way.  Her critique included the following, “Let me say immediately that you are a wonderful writer.  This story is delightful!  Lily is a very lovable character and you have a good story, full of tension and I loved how she solved her problem (that she created herself) all by herself.  It’s well written, too.”  And she included, “Please keep me posted on the future of this story.  I have high hopes for it!”

I really needed this!!  After submitting some of my stories to a few editors and agents, I was getting a little discouraged.  This is a long process and much more difficult than I ever imagined.  Having someone like Verla Kay give such a complimentary and encouraging critique really made my day! 

As a writer, you know when a story comes together and conveys the message you want to get across.  It’s a very personal process.  I know in my heart that I’m a good storyteller, but being able to “tell” a good story and “write” a good story are two very different things.  I have learned something from every comment, every review, every critique group session, every person who’s read my stories and offered suggestions and ideas – it’s all worked together to make my stories what they are today.